Unwanted Thread from awhile back

[Pickle9775]

Yea, I got rid of what this once was.

 

[AlexTheCoder]

What happened to the "living being" from the beginning of the story?

 

[Pickle9775]

What happened to the "living being" from the beginning of the story?

What do you mean? If you're referring to a zombie, its dead. I try to use more unique was to say zombie.

 

[AlexTheCoder]

Meh, I didn't get zombie from that, probably because you referred to it as "living", while zombies are animated dead bodies.

 

[Pickle9775]

Meh, I didn't get zombie from that, probably because you referred to it as "living", while zombies are animated dead bodies.

All right. Also, what about the story do you feel could be better? Keep in mind I wrote most of the early bits quite awhile ago, and I have improved drastically.

 

[SamuraiSnowman]

I think you should just put all these into 1 post, and just keep editing to add each chapter.

 

[Pickle9775]

I think you should just put all these into 1 post, and just keep editing to add each chapter.

Yea that's probably a smart idea.

 

[AlexTheCoder]

Yeah. Less spammy that way. Spammy bad!

 

[ashe36]

That's impossible. There's only so many characters per post.

 

[AlexTheCoder]

Good point!

 

[SamuraiSnowman]

That's impossible. There's only so many characters per post.

It could just be done by adding a comment..

 

[ashe36]

Unorganized